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西園弖虎 | nishizono "anarchist antichrist" tetora ([personal profile] nishizono) wrote in [community profile] quietplace 2018-03-20 05:20 pm (UTC)

[ oh my god uncle jim chill ]

he was a cop. a straight and narrow type but he dresses like a fucking goon with the shaved head and neck chain bullshit. undercover bullshit.

we drove around while getting chased by people who wanted to kill me, it was cool.

okay, first lesson: use contractions because it sounds more natural. "where's" versus "where is".
also it's longer the usual way.

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