rou_gui: (Corydalis ambigua)
𝔔etzi'ah 𝔐orrison ([personal profile] rou_gui) wrote in [community profile] quietplace2018-02-05 06:51 pm

un: qetziah (the golden morning breaks)

Once upon a time, beneath the branches of a golden tree, lived a firebird who danced and spun, spitting flames from her plumage, which would have razed any other wood. Instead, her light flickered in the golden boughs of her special, lonely place. She ate golden apples, alone, and she drank silver water, alone.

Not even birds would fly above her shining, golden woods.



Lonely, she wept bitter, burning tears, and over time she, slowly, ceased to dance and spin, and the lights no longer shimmered among the trunks of all her golden trees. She sat in stillness and in silence in the darkness of her jeweled maze of trees.

In that silence, she was forgotten, and bandits and thieves began to infiltrate the golden woods. Looking for treasure they could take away with them, and finding instead only one sad bird and a boughful of golden apples.

When they approached her with their nets the bird screamed like a newborn and spit fire in every direction, leaving charred lacuna in their clothing wherever she touched them. So they dipped their ugly sack into the silver river, and pulled it dripping and drowning over her head in order to carry her away.

They carried her from her golden forest, across a barren, rocky plain, and at last up the steps of a cold, stone-built fort. They put her in a cage, under which they could insert planks of firewood. As though she were a hearth.

'To keep us warm,' they told her motioning to dirty women and dirty children looking on in awe. One would think they might be grateful, in respect of her heat in the face of a cold, lonely world. No, instead that awe would fade soon enough, and there would be too many small, grubby faces rattling sticks around her, jabbing at her and laughing at how she had no defenses. Food would be thrown at her, rotten things she could not even eat.

Peevish and injured, she spit fire into the face of one small tormentor, and burned half of it away. In revenge, the father came and ripped at her feathers while wearing thick leather gloves. She spit at him too, but he raised his arm and kept his damned eyes, losing only the sleeve of his shirt.

Smoldering in their courtyard, she sniped a few more that way, gasping out fireballs at their unsuspecting flesh... While her captors now had no silver river to dip her into to keep her under control, they would instead throw buckets water at her during the day, sending her sputtering as though she might truly be put out.

And she thought, truly, she might die there in that cage.

It was after the little boy, whose face she had melted, threw water at her again, laughing... She decided, not to suffer such a fate. She would dance, despite the smallness of her cage. So when the night fell, she began. She battered herself into its brass fittings, bruised limbs and blooded face, until she became a whirlwind of flame not a one of her captors could ever dream of putting out. Even as they came stumbling from their beds to investigate their terrible sounds of her body flailing; too late.

She burned them all, in the oven of that stone-built fort, and she melted down the cage around her. She picked her way through its remains carefully as she stalked from the charred corpse of the castle.

Once more able to see out across the plains, she waited for the morning to break, and for the sun to show her the glittering path back to the golden woods. She would travel back there, limping and alone, and she would return to her stillness and her silence and her darkness, alone.

Without even a bird above for which to lift her head.

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